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	<title>Comments on: Best ego-driven writer response ever</title>
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		<title>By: Heather Corinna</title>
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		<dc:creator>Heather Corinna</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 16 May 2006 06:51:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This is a thing of beauty.  Truly.  save this: you will want to see it again someday about many an editorial comment.

In related news, at the tail end of the first gargantuan edit of my book, I accepted an ex-girlfriend's help (who knows why) on some edits.

In a section about vulval anatomy, she made several notes about her own cervical mucus and her feelings about it. (She was not particularly helpful with the editing process, to say the least.) I should have made the note you did, really.  Instead, my notes on her notes read, "M's vaginal discharges no longer my concern."

P.S.  Happy birthday, babe!</description>
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<p>In related news, at the tail end of the first gargantuan edit of my book, I accepted an ex-girlfriend&#8217;s help (who knows why) on some edits.</p>
<p>In a section about vulval anatomy, she made several notes about her own cervical mucus and her feelings about it. (She was not particularly helpful with the editing process, to say the least.) I should have made the note you did, really.  Instead, my notes on her notes read, &#8220;M&#8217;s vaginal discharges no longer my concern.&#8221;</p>
<p>P.S.  Happy birthday, babe!</p>
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